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    Post by Lord Grey II Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:26 am

    Story time!

    Rules of the thread: One sentence at a time, as long as you'd like to make it. You may only use one semi-colon and only one colon. (This is to prevent people like me from writing thousand word sentences. :3 ) We're writing a story, one sentence and one post at a time. You may not post a sentence just after posting another of your own.

    Try to make the story vaguely coherent, but feel free to take it in any direction and make it as silly or dramatic as you'd like!

    Let's begin. :3

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    Once upon a time, it was a dark and stormy night.
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    Post by SD Tue Feb 02, 2010 12:45 pm

    There was a little cabin, on the outskirts of a town.
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    Post by Teasealot Tue Feb 02, 2010 2:13 pm

    A vixen sat on the porch, polishing her shotgun.
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    Post by Lord Grey II Tue Feb 02, 2010 2:19 pm

    A flash of lightning ripped the night in two, and thunder shook the ground.
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    Post by LastArcher Tue Feb 02, 2010 4:07 pm

    A man, who was lost in his thoughts, looks up, surprised by the flash and thunder.
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    Post by Night Dragon Tue Feb 02, 2010 4:48 pm

    A bat takes flight screaming from a nearby tree diving toward the man.
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    Post by Bosco1513 Tue Feb 02, 2010 7:00 pm

    Suddenly, a shot pierced the darkness around the man.


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    Post by Lord Grey II Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:14 pm

    Bosco1513 wrote:When suddenly a shot rang out.

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    The vixen stood on her porch, holding the smoking gun with a mad gleam in her eye.
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    Post by Bosco1513 Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:29 pm

    Former post edited to become a sentence.

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    She had been watching the man for the few minutes.
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    Post by Blackwolf Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:35 pm

    The man swears and drops to the ground in fear
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    Post by Invalid Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:27 am

    She then aims her shot-gun right at the man.
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    Post by Night Dragon Sun Feb 07, 2010 1:21 am

    The man looks at the vixen and starts begging that he is only lost, cold, and wounded.
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    Post by LastArcher Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:50 pm

    He asks for help.
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    Post by Bosco1513 Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:45 pm

    She tells him to move before more bats come.
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    Post by Invalid Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:20 pm

    He does not move in time as bats knock him down.
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    Post by Blackwolf Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:08 am

    The vixen sighs from her hiding spot as the man is devoured by the bats
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    Post by Lord Grey II Thu Feb 11, 2010 1:48 pm

    For some inexplicable reason, everything turns bright pink for five seconds.
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    Post by Blackwolf Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:43 am

    The khaos roc which had just passed overhead hiccuped again and flew off towards Mexico
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    Post by Night Dragon Thu Feb 18, 2010 3:22 pm

    The vixen comes out with her shotgun on her shoulder as she slowly walks home.
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    Post by Teasealot Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:49 pm

    The vixen arrives home, locks her door behind her and lights the cabin's fire.
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    Post by Invalid Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:51 pm

    Then all the sudden the vixen here's something knocking from inside the closet.
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    Post by Blackwolf Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:17 pm

    "miss vixen, please let me out now" pleads a childs voice
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    Post by Night Dragon Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:26 pm

    The vixen turns slowly to the closet to find a mime coming out of her bathroom.
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    Post by Blackwolf Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:41 am

    The vixen squeals in fright and flees from the dreaded mime
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    Post by Nilo Kaal Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:02 pm

    Her boyfriend laughs as he takes off the mime costume and motions towards the closet saying, "You might wanna get that."

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